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Evocation
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Evocation |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I could melt in your eyes Touche your feelings Have you know my heart In magic that transports me For you are magic and you twend and twist to establish words motion emotion movement darkness light In a swift Evocation |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 loved this! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks I like this myself and I had to stop writing because I felt I would have destroyed it, had I written more Dave |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sometimes it's the shorter ones that pack the bigger punch, so to speak...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Dave.. what a very special write. Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Dave! I read in your reply that you were tempted to continue writing this poem, but to be perfectly honest, the way it is, is perfect! Less is actually more with this fine write!   Linda |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice one dave My spirit will rise |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dave I like it just the way it is Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm, seems I found me a  !"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks all I am staying back for a Sunday and doing the early Monday haul. Good to relax and write words Dave |
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