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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2005-10-29 01:58 AM



invisible i return to you
your beauty brings me back again
forever disappears in your eyes
and if i should look , would you ever forget
that my heart holds your smile
something about our meeting
stirs a place of mystery and love
within my soul

under the stars
under the moon
look into the deep blue midnight
I touch your hand as we walk the shore
whispering to each other of our pasts
of those ghosts that never surrender
and of the dreams we have had
a spark you found in me

as the cool air descends on us
i give you my coat of arms  
and hold you closer to me
resting your tired head on my shoulder
I feel my heartbeat close to yours
as the moment slips into eternity
the seconds turn into hours
drifting into a dream true with passion
with you sweetly singing under this harvest moon


JDW III
10-29-05

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1 posted 2005-10-29 02:07 AM


~"my heart holds your smile"

~ "as the cool air descends on us
  i give you my coat of arms"

Those lines literally make me sigh! Not only are you poetically romantic ~ but you are chivalrous as well!
Flowers Knight

Loverly!

EA
  

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2 posted 2005-10-29 02:17 AM


thanks angel lol
you made me smile with the cool little knight dude icon ....
this poem is a fantasy
it would be too cool if it ever came true
llol
peace and pens
~JW

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3 posted 2005-10-29 02:21 AM


Fantasy or not, you ARE romantic, you ARE poetic, and you ARE chivalrous! lol

Sleep well this knight, I mean "night" and may your dreams become your reality!

Love & Light,
EA

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4 posted 2005-10-29 11:07 AM


"as the cool air descends on us
i give you my coat of arms"

Such a warm feeling throughout this piece..
love the 'coat of arms'...very nice indeed.
Hugs~Nancy  

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2005-10-29 12:25 PM


muy romantico
very nice

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6 posted 2005-10-29 01:44 PM


enchantress
thats just what i was aiming for
purrfect lol
thanks for the kindness
~james

Inked .... lol a howling romantic
i am , look out ladys
wooof woof

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7 posted 2005-10-29 03:20 PM


~a true romanic moment...well captured in the beauty of your words...

~a Wolfman in shining armor...

digging it~

glad you are here, Wolfie~

~baby

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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8 posted 2005-10-29 04:26 PM


~a Wolfman in shining armor...

hahaa that made me laugh
who would have ever thought
it could be so loll
i am glad your here too
babygirl ~~~~

tonight we toast to romance
hugs, ~wolfie

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