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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2005-10-28 02:13 PM


And draped as she was to the arched back of chair
It was a ligatures of dreams knotted across
Naked thighs of phrasing that held closest
Flesh to a twisted real
Where hands twined strands of hair
Between chapped knuckles stretching back
The throat bared of vowels till of the songs sung
By twilight wind upon stripped limbs
There were but moans
To haunt within a recessed pattern of shadows
The corner of eyes
She sat there

As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs
Incised within the surface of stone
Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words
Turning upon the slow lips to beg
For flesh against the salt of sea so found
In the wet of some midnight dream
That left me spent of dry mouthed curse

To bring the rain
And pray a quench of such parched desire
To stroke soft the curves of her
In a writhe of half eyed craze
Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe


Braided knots untied
I found the fibers within marrow
As I turned a four over leaf to hitch
Bared vein to hers
And flow the strings of words
That runs to black upon a page
Another day
Another tome of strangled phrase to shut hard
The breath of me
As she inhales
and

We bleed
Shared veins

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babygirlwlove
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1 posted 2005-10-28 02:19 PM


~captivating~

~such beautiful poetry~
~raises the gooseflesh on the soul, Chief~

love you fierce~
~baby~

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-10-28 02:24 PM




my day is complete.



and this piece is haunting...in a good way.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

SEA
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3 posted 2005-10-28 02:30 PM


"As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs
Incised within the surface of stone
Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words
Turning upon the slow lips to beg
For flesh against the salt of sea so found
In the wet of some midnight dream
That left me spent of dry mouthed curse

To bring the rain
And pray a quench of such parched desire
To stroke soft the curves of her
In a writhe of half eyed craze
Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe"


I love to read you....LOVE to...and you always leave me wanting more

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2005-10-28 03:56 PM


sighing

There you are.

It's like yer the National Guard of poetry or sumpthin'. I mean, I'm not complainin', but where the hell were you?

*laughing*

inhale

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

thank you

suthern
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5 posted 2005-10-28 03:58 PM


Heavens, it's good to read your work! *S*

Excellent, my friend. *S*

Angelheart
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6 posted 2005-10-28 04:06 PM


nice write, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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7 posted 2005-10-28 04:19 PM


...Damn!!

Where have you been?

No one takes my breath away like you do with you words.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

Sunshine
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8 posted 2005-10-28 04:51 PM



...

It must be winter.


Martie
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9 posted 2005-10-28 04:57 PM


Ron

"To bring the rain
And pray a quench of such parched desire
To stroke soft the curves of her
In a writhe of half eyed craze
Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe"

It has been dry around here without your words...it's very good to read you!!



babygirlwlove
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10 posted 2005-10-28 05:36 PM


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more please....

lol
~baby

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Cpat Hair
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11 posted 2005-10-29 10:57 AM


many... many thanks to you all...

life, while mine has not been the aftermath of a hurricane nor someof the other disasters that have plagued the country this year... life has been interesting.. and is changing.. so, my time and access to the forum as well has been severly limited.

so..apologies to all... for the lack of replies...and for dropping off the face of the earth...

hugs m'friends... and the best of wishes for you all.

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12 posted 2005-11-01 02:18 PM


~sigh~
"The throat bared of vowels till of the songs sung"
Ron, the next time you drop off? just remember some of us hold our breath while awaiting your re-entry

Greeneyes
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13 posted 2005-11-01 05:12 PM


A pause to breathe ''''
good to see you here.....amazing you....

hugsss

LeeJ
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14 posted 2005-11-02 09:35 AM


As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs
Incised within the surface of stone
Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words
Turning upon the slow lips to beg
For flesh against the salt of sea so found
In the wet of some midnight dream
That left me spent of dry mouthed curse


whoa...I gotta tell you, you not only amaze, with your stories, but truly make the reader ache for more...this was tremendous, tintilating, mysterious, and full, simply full of open air visuals for the mind to go anywhere with. Marvelous write!

Janet Marie
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15 posted 2005-11-02 03:09 PM


Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I see you havent lost your touch...but then I never thought you would...

"passing grains of sand...carried by the flow...rivers never sleep"  

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out ...
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

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16 posted 2005-11-21 02:17 AM


Dynamic...that's the word for this, and for all your poetry.

Yes, dynamic will do just fine.....depth, power, energy, movement, change that comes quickly even within stasis....dynamic.

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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
17 posted 2005-11-21 08:17 AM


Fabulous!
pictureme2
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18 posted 2005-11-21 10:24 PM


Wow! Very pleasing write. I wasn't
ready for it to end but the ending is
also perfect! Great write!
Thanks for sharing,
pictureme2

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19 posted 2005-11-22 02:03 AM


sometimes, when i read you, i imagine myself exhaling quickly ..and a bunch of dust escaping from my mouth..

that's what my words become, cpat! dust!

you leave me in it with such powerful poetry.

Cpat Hair
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20 posted 2005-11-22 09:10 AM


My humble..and sincere thanks to you all who have read and commented..or just passed by...

the company I work for is being sold and the summer months have come and gone, with me being involved in the secretive world of providing data for negotiations, deceiving the people around me who didn't know what is going on...and coming to terms with the death of my mother....

tomorrow.... brings a new set of problems to solve as I work to figure out what to do with the rest of my working life..try to find a job...go into business for myself..or what....

my absence..will continue.. but I wanted to thank you all...and to let those who might come back to this and read...know what is going on...

for those of you with my old e-mail address, be advised...it won't get to me any longer and I have not established an new one..

many many.. heartfelt thank yous... to all who have read and supported my feeble efforts here..

may god bless.... you all

Sunshine
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21 posted 2005-11-22 03:53 PM


Do check in when you can, our Friend...
Soon!


.

Susan Caldwell
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22 posted 2007-07-24 03:37 PM


I know you..

you're still writing..

maybe even reading.

maybe you had the right idea..to just drop off the face of the earth..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

SEA
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23 posted 2007-07-24 07:07 PM


no...he didn't darn it...I miss reading him so much
Martie
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24 posted 2007-07-24 10:58 PM


I wonder if he will read this from some other desk in another place, another time and miss us too...I want to think so.
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25 posted 2007-10-28 07:08 PM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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