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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 10-28-2005 02:13 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cpat Hair

And draped as she was to the arched back of chair
It was a ligatures of dreams knotted across
Naked thighs of phrasing that held closest
Flesh to a twisted real
Where hands twined strands of hair
Between chapped knuckles stretching back
The throat bared of vowels till of the songs sung
By twilight wind upon stripped limbs
There were but moans
To haunt within a recessed pattern of shadows
The corner of eyes
She sat there

As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs
Incised within the surface of stone
Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words
Turning upon the slow lips to beg
For flesh against the salt of sea so found
In the wet of some midnight dream
That left me spent of dry mouthed curse

To bring the rain
And pray a quench of such parched desire
To stroke soft the curves of her
In a writhe of half eyed craze
Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe


Braided knots untied
I found the fibers within marrow
As I turned a four over leaf to hitch
Bared vein to hers
And flow the strings of words
That runs to black upon a page
Another day
Another tome of strangled phrase to shut hard
The breath of me
As she inhales
and

We bleed
Shared veins
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babygirlwlove
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1 posted 10-28-2005 02:19 PM       View Profile for babygirlwlove   Email babygirlwlove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babygirlwlove

~captivating~

~such beautiful poetry~
~raises the gooseflesh on the soul, Chief~

love you fierce~
~baby~

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 10-28-2005 02:24 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell



my day is complete.



and this piece is haunting...in a good way.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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3 posted 10-28-2005 02:30 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs
Incised within the surface of stone
Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words
Turning upon the slow lips to beg
For flesh against the salt of sea so found
In the wet of some midnight dream
That left me spent of dry mouthed curse

To bring the rain
And pray a quench of such parched desire
To stroke soft the curves of her
In a writhe of half eyed craze
Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe"


I love to read you....LOVE to...and you always leave me wanting more
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4 posted 10-28-2005 03:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

sighing

There you are.

It's like yer the National Guard of poetry or sumpthin'. I mean, I'm not complainin', but where the hell were you?

*laughing*

inhale

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

thank you
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 10-28-2005 03:58 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Heavens, it's good to read your work! *S*

Excellent, my friend. *S*
Angelheart
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6 posted 10-28-2005 04:06 PM       View Profile for Angelheart   Email Angelheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelheart

nice write, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 10-28-2005 04:19 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

...Damn!!

Where have you been?

No one takes my breath away like you do with you words.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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8 posted 10-28-2005 04:51 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


...

It must be winter.

Martie
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Ron

"To bring the rain
And pray a quench of such parched desire
To stroke soft the curves of her
In a writhe of half eyed craze
Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe"

It has been dry around here without your words...it's very good to read you!!


babygirlwlove
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10 posted 10-28-2005 05:36 PM       View Profile for babygirlwlove   Email babygirlwlove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babygirlwlove

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more please....

lol
~baby

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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11 posted 10-29-2005 10:57 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

many... many thanks to you all...

life, while mine has not been the aftermath of a hurricane nor someof the other disasters that have plagued the country this year... life has been interesting.. and is changing.. so, my time and access to the forum as well has been severly limited.

so..apologies to all... for the lack of replies...and for dropping off the face of the earth...

hugs m'friends... and the best of wishes for you all.
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12 posted 11-01-2005 02:18 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

~sigh~
"The throat bared of vowels till of the songs sung"
Ron, the next time you drop off? just remember some of us hold our breath while awaiting your re-entry
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13 posted 11-01-2005 05:12 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

A pause to breathe ''''
good to see you here.....amazing you....

hugsss
LeeJ
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14 posted 11-02-2005 09:35 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

As in the midst of verse I found fine glyphs
Incised within the surface of stone
Recounting a foreign tongued swallow of silken words
Turning upon the slow lips to beg
For flesh against the salt of sea so found
In the wet of some midnight dream
That left me spent of dry mouthed curse


whoa...I gotta tell you, you not only amaze, with your stories, but truly make the reader ache for more...this was tremendous, tintilating, mysterious, and full, simply full of open air visuals for the mind to go anywhere with. Marvelous write!
Janet Marie
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15 posted 11-02-2005 03:09 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Where she craved a line ellipsed
A pause to breathe

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I see you havent lost your touch...but then I never thought you would...

"passing grains of sand...carried by the flow...rivers never sleep"  

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out ...
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

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16 posted 11-21-2005 02:17 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Dynamic...that's the word for this, and for all your poetry.

Yes, dynamic will do just fine.....depth, power, energy, movement, change that comes quickly even within stasis....dynamic.

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17 posted 11-21-2005 08:17 AM       View Profile for Misty Lilacs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Misty Lilacs

Fabulous!
pictureme2
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18 posted 11-21-2005 10:24 PM       View Profile for pictureme2   Email pictureme2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pictureme2

Wow! Very pleasing write. I wasn't
ready for it to end but the ending is
also perfect! Great write!
Thanks for sharing,
pictureme2
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19 posted 11-22-2005 02:03 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

sometimes, when i read you, i imagine myself exhaling quickly ..and a bunch of dust escaping from my mouth..

that's what my words become, cpat! dust!

you leave me in it with such powerful poetry.
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20 posted 11-22-2005 09:10 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

My humble..and sincere thanks to you all who have read and commented..or just passed by...

the company I work for is being sold and the summer months have come and gone, with me being involved in the secretive world of providing data for negotiations, deceiving the people around me who didn't know what is going on...and coming to terms with the death of my mother....

tomorrow.... brings a new set of problems to solve as I work to figure out what to do with the rest of my working life..try to find a job...go into business for myself..or what....

my absence..will continue.. but I wanted to thank you all...and to let those who might come back to this and read...know what is going on...

for those of you with my old e-mail address, be advised...it won't get to me any longer and I have not established an new one..

many many.. heartfelt thank yous... to all who have read and supported my feeble efforts here..

may god bless.... you all
Sunshine
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21 posted 11-22-2005 03:53 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Do check in when you can, our Friend...
Soon!


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Susan Caldwell
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22 posted 07-24-2007 03:37 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I know you..

you're still writing..

maybe even reading.

maybe you had the right idea..to just drop off the face of the earth..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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23 posted 07-24-2007 07:07 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

no...he didn't darn it...I miss reading him so much
Martie
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24 posted 07-24-2007 10:58 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I wonder if he will read this from some other desk in another place, another time and miss us too...I want to think so.
 
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