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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2005-10-28 12:31 PM

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keeper of my heart
steely-eyed phantom lover
demanding my wait
haunts my nights, invades my days
sweet ghost, unlock this prison

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Chris Barker
October 2005
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artwork by Raymond Leech

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-10-28 01:06 PM

Excellent Chris!!
You do these so very well~
Love ya, Teed

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-10-28 01:36 PM

Thanks Teed. Hugs! Miss you !!!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2005-10-28 01:41 PM

All right you two, I want in on this love fest! And your sis is right, as usual, you do this very well.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-10-28 01:45 PM

Awww...thankyou Larry. I'd hug you if I could reach thru the screen...lol.!!!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2005-10-28 02:16 PM

Lonely searching soul...
Hearts solitary tenant,
As Nightshade’s passion
Softly breaks into the dawn,
Patience; for the heart to melt.

My Reply...in Tanka form.
INclan

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-10-28 02:58 PM

INclan - your response is just beautiful.
Thankyou & Hugs!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2005-10-28 03:03 PM

Chris~
This is so good~
I always enjoy your ink~

InClan's reply is captivating too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-10-28 04:09 PM

Thanks & hugs Marge.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2005-10-28 08:43 PM

this rocks

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2005-10-28 09:04 PM

SEA - thankyou so much! Hugs!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2005-10-28 09:43 PM

IF I had someone like her (in the pic)....
I don't think I would be writing poetry!!!

Nice one Chris...must be about time for me
to bring out the Phantom of the Blue Walls
to stalk the halls again...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2005-10-28 10:11 PM

Magnus my friend...that sounds like a great idea, and thankyou for replying. Hugs!

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