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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-10-28 07:53 AM


when you run through the streets
with your long gown
tearing on the hedges of sand
I smile at how you slip
on the cobblestones
and fall slowly
so I will always have time
to be under you with my arms

you came back this morning
like a tip toe lover
but you honked so I would be ready
and would open the car door
of your pedestrian
and watch you on the stairs
that were built special
just for you to walk down

I smell him on you
my favorite perfume really
you call it a taste
and when you wear it
I know you are hungry
and want to go to the movies
at the blind theatre
but you won't wear gloves this time

I promise to hold your hand
or at least your wrists
and make you do it
til the intermission is over
and the round room spins again
may I hold your tattoos too
while you bathe there
in the sand of our saliva

please say no and let me take you


______________
dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-28-2005 08:51 AM).]

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-10-28 08:00 AM


there is to this a depth, beyond what is...
an all knowing sense, of what speaks to us
in the outer core of what we may claim, even if just for a moment, it is ours, and all else
becomes
unimportant...
Like God's voice, shivering us....

exceptional write and pleasurable read

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-10-28 08:04 AM


humble thanks lee j..
you smile me

babygirlwlove
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3 posted 2005-10-28 08:12 AM


~love your twists, darkie~

~babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-10-28 08:53 AM


ms bbg..lil one, you are candy
and my hound loves sweets
thank you

SEA
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with you
5 posted 2005-10-28 09:08 AM


no

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2005-10-28 09:46 AM


ms suesea..oh thank you
was hoping for that

Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-10-28 10:44 AM



Dang it...

Sue stole my line!


Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2005-10-28 11:20 AM


Always love the way you sheath...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2005-10-28 11:29 AM


ms sunny..oh please say it again.

___________

ms susanC, moi?  thanks hon, you please me exsheathingly..

Sunshine
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10 posted 2005-10-28 12:00 PM


Dang it!

Sue stole my line!


Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2005-10-28 01:22 PM


ms sunny..
additional comments sent through mental mail
wink

Indigo
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12 posted 2005-10-28 02:38 PM


In the darkness,
when the flicker of celluloid
painted Fellini's dreams
over every inch of her skin,
It was anything but pedestrian.

Mmmmmm... Saturday afternoon matinee's are my favorite!
Indigo



Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
13 posted 2005-10-28 03:00 PM


and ms indigo,
her midnight lace
is laceless facing my eyes
from a window's prospective
she whispers prose activly

thank you mon verve

MGROVES
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california
14 posted 2005-10-30 02:21 AM


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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