Lovers Always Lose The First Battle

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2005-10-28 01:44 AM

(Here's a new song I wrote about how young love can indeed make many feel soooooooo emotional, and though I have yet to feel love's first kiss how even so I can only imagine how emotional and magical teenage love especially can be, just dreaming of what it'll feel like when I meet my dream girl! I feel this is a song many young lovers can relate to!)

Lovers Always Lose The First Battle
By: Noah Eaton
10/27/05

Ever so often,
I still imagine how it’d all be without you,
reminding myself,
there used to be a time when I never had you.
All this pensiveness, biting of nails,
longing for a little wind in my sails,
so long I’ve had to go it alone,
when you think too much of it, it hurts breathing on your own.

Now, I’m feeling your warmth,
my legs are feeling light,
I’m enchanted by the light in your eyes,
you keep crossing my mind,
for the first time, I’m sweating less than I bleed,
but at least you’re holding me,
you always make me feel alive,
feeling your heartbeat can drive me crazy,
your kiss always has my heart racing,
I don’t know where to go from here, but it feels so good,
cuz lovers always lose the first battle,
lovers always lose the first battle.

Ever so often,
I recall how it was feeling homesick,
had me worrying,
how it’d feel being lovesick.
That’s why everytime you’re out of sight,
it somehow feels like I’m left behind,
but you left your heart in my hands,
ooohhhh, and you know I love meeting your demands.

Now, I’m feeling your warmth,
my legs are feeling light,
I’m enchanted by the light in your eyes,
you keep crossing my mind,
for the first time, I’m sweating less than I bleed,
but at least you’re holding me,
you always make me feel alive,
feeling your heartbeat can drive me crazy,
your kiss always has my heart racing,
I don’t know where to go from here, but it feels so good,
cuz lovers always lose the first battle,
lovers always lose the first battle.
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Now, I’m feeling your warmth,
my legs are feeling light,
I’m enchanted by the light in your eyes,
you keep crossing my mind,
for the first time, I’m sweating less than I bleed,
but at least you’re holding me,
you always make me feel alive,
feeling your heartbeat can drive me crazy,
your kiss always has my heart racing,
I don’t know where to go from here, but it feels so good,
cuz lovers always lose the first battle,
lovers always lose the first battle.

You’re the sunshine to each sentimental day,
and you follow through every wish I’ve made,
and the smiles you leave every time you walk my way,
and the laughter you make all across life’s midway.

***

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-10-28 01:52 AM

Noah Angel, this is such a warm, sensitive, and sweet write. I can't believe you've never been kissed by love......I'll just have to give you one (although, I am taken)....lol......

.....jo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-10-28 10:25 AM

Noah, you're back! Gosh, I have been missing your sweet presence at Pip and your poetry!

This is a beautiful expression of love for she who will one day enter your life.