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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-10-27 08:19 AM


I try
to out run
being lost,

within my own thoughts.

With no escape;
I suffocate

the need to bleed
emotions
from heart and soul
for order to be found
that I might gain control

and take back
what is rightfully mine.

I keep running
and running
but I can't find

escape

from feeling

lost.



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-10-27 08:20 AM






nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-10-27 08:43 AM


It's the same for me Donna...

felt you through your words

M

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-10-27 09:10 AM


Yanno, Dear Donna, many of us have to be lost before we are found. I understand these emotions that you have so realistically expressed.

~ and when you find yourself again, you will be in great company! ~ yourself!

Sending you a loving hug, my friend,
Linda

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-10-27 09:15 AM




thanks all...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-10-27 09:17 AM


Donna?

C'mere....

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

Thomas119gold
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6 posted 2005-10-27 09:47 AM




Rings so true

Tom

Martie
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7 posted 2005-10-27 12:46 PM


Donna....The thing about being lost is, you can be found (find yourself).  
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just out of reach
8 posted 2005-10-27 01:08 PM


I have been there too Donna. I mean...wherever lost is...lol. But, I found myself. Hooray for me.
You will be just fine. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-10-27 06:58 PM


This has been one damn tough week gang, and dealing with this entire landlord thing has just drained me of everything, but things are looking like there could be some sunshine float my way tomorrow...

so I will simply say thanks to each of you who have been encouraging and supporting me through this mess.

Love ya'll!


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10 posted 2005-10-28 03:44 PM


You have written this feeling so very well...
Angelheart
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11 posted 2005-10-28 04:28 PM


nice, thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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