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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Eye deliberate concealed a hairlip in my palm it smiled exposing canine tooth the blood is shadow on the wall of cave cueneform, the first billboard: "Burmashave" I walked away bi-pedal pedestrian hairy, dancing on the graves of all before who dared to rhyme Whitman, Blake, and Yeats--a sign of simple minds which resonate simplicity of time. Words, they should not minuette? Then why not be a mime instead? Finding ye profundity reflected in a shallow pool stillness of a mirror glass The greedy dog became an ass when he dropped the bone he clasped to feed upon the bone he spied-- reflections of the very eye deliberate concealed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a bone droppin good write |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love it. And, ok, so I don't totally get it, but I'm quite sure that's mostly just because of the meds I'm on. I'll read it again soon, and get it, and then love it even more. It's hard not to love every single word you write. I'm still not sure how you do it... (um, the writing, that is)  . Wonderful to read you again.Always, Alyssa PS. did you mean cuneiform? Probably not, like I said... the meds... Hupomeno. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
GG! YAY! and yes, I should have looked it up--I knew it didn't look right (I go by the "it doesn't look right school of Spelling") I have missed you sweetheart.  thanks, so much for being here. Get well soon, k? I love you.  and Kacy? *winks* yanno I love ya too. *smooch* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
of all before who dared to rhyme Whitman, Blake, and Yeats--a sign of simple minds which resonate simplicity of time. Words, they should not minuette? Then why not be a mime instead? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ psssst.... ( you rock, you rock, you rock ) lawdy... Id read ya till I went blind and then Id read ya with me lips and fingertips.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
K-lady.....I'd pull out the same lines as JanetMarie......a true reflection of your uniqueness! I loved it, too!  ....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The greedy dog became an ass when he dropped the bone he clasped to feed upon the bone he spied-- reflections of the very eye ~*~ This one sneaks up on you! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The greedy dog became an ass when he dropped the bone he clasped to feed upon the bone he spied--" yep. I know I am repeating but I don't care...those lines are worth repeating... I know people like that. I know too many people like that.  love you lady! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW !!!  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
you are amazing~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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