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Open Poetry #36

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

0 posted 2005-10-26 01:55 PM

Everybody on board
advice for the search
for an answer from within
or do we give up
I mean give in

may ask a question
the answer you know
expecting an allowance
informative flow

deflect my attention
to my inner self
trove of details
stored on shelf
give up easily
on keys to success
to gold in the safe
for an answer within

to begin
before one yields
refuses the drive
to anticipated allowance

focused attention
to trove of details
keys of success
informative flow
facial expressions
demonstrate glow

[This message has been edited by wordwizard (10-26-2005 07:17 PM).]

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-10-26 07:09 PM

this was very good, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-10-26 07:10 PM

nice thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

3 posted 2005-10-26 07:18 PM

rewrote the last bit and added somemore..thanks for sharing

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