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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-10-26 12:50 PM



Seems The Joke Is On Me

I believed you all this time
The fault was my own
I have been too trusting
When I should have known

Trusting you with my heart
As I gave you the key
Believing your promises
I can blame no one but me

I have let my feelings grow
The fact was you knew
Having let myself believe
Knowing thats my fault too

All the years I have trusted
Just imagine how I feel
Seems the joke is on me
Yet my aching heart is real

Hope ©2005
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-10-26 09:19 AM


*sigh* don't we all know this?

  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-10-26 09:29 AM


don't be to hard on yourself, it's not a crime to trust, but it is a crime to lose that trust, because we didn't gain what we wanted...I believe life, knows what's best, and if we can let go of the past, who knows, what stores are there for us?


Wonderful write....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-10-26 10:04 AM


my aching heart is real...and nothing about loving someone is a joke~~


M

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