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Open Poetry #36

White Light of Moon

Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

0 posted 2005-10-25 09:54 PM

Bright light of the Stars, entrust
Me with love and lust
For I have been blessed from above.
I faintly begin to comprehend love,
This feeling through my veins,
Through my soul. Burning away all pains
That ever dared to lock me down.
Her perfect scent, her magical gown,
A storm of passion will be dealt.
For my love, ice will melt
From her warm, reaching hand and she must realize
That tonight, the Stars shall dance in her eyes...

Watching you with the light of Moon,
I know that you will be mine soon...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-10-25 10:47 PM

Very nice. Enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-10-26 12:25 PM

Enjoyed...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-10-26 09:10 AM

"Her perfect scent, her magical gown"

To have someone long for our scent...that is what life is about.

I liked this very much.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-10-26 09:18 AM

"From her warm, reaching hand and she must realize
That tonight, the Stars shall dance in her eyes...

Watching you with the light of Moon,
I know that you will be mine soon..."

Beautiful...absolutely beautiful!
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-10-26 11:34 AM

Burning away all pains
That ever dared to lock me down.

it can do that~~

M

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