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Open Poetry #36

defining the line

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-10-25 09:51 PM

She defined the line.
Then she challenged us to cross.
Never to step back.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2005-10-25 10:57 PM

i only wish more would hear her
you know?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-10-26 12:17 PM

Enjoyed...James

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2005-10-26 08:51 AM

Dressed in soft armor
The warrier drew a line
And brave lads and lasses crossed

You apparently are one of them
That took her lead,
never looking back
to see if it was a mistake;
Knowing that it wasn't..

The simplicity of the three lined form
Is why it is effective,
But only when it is done well,
as this one is....

-----------------ice
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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-10-26 09:06 AM

Perfection drizzled with the know of things...

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