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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2005-10-25 08:54 PM



Today's Aphorism

You are here.
(no, no! Not that way,
this way.
No! No! Not over there,
over here! ... Here!
I'm not over there; I'm over here.
Here! ... I'm right here! ...
Right hear! I'm here, he ....)

Okay, Bob.  Now you know the plan.
The attack's set for daybreak Lunar time ... That's about two minutes from now.
FT


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Angelheart
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1 posted 2005-10-25 08:59 PM


this is like hide-and-go seek..  i like it!  LOL kinda humorious.. but nice, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
2 posted 2005-10-25 09:22 PM


Midnitesun know about the literary catagory known as twaddle.
:---------------)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2005-10-25 09:25 PM


rolling on the floor in laughter, Jaime

yep, I do know about twaddle, as I've twaddled too often myself

LOL  

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-10-25 11:40 PM


LOL

I know what twaddling is! I do that with my thumbs! ~ or is that "twiddling"?!?

Twiddly, twaddly, doo!

Toodle loo!

Loves and laughs,
EA

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2005-10-27 12:34 PM


  I love this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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6 posted 2005-11-21 09:24 AM


Kewl poem to read AT DAWN.....how'd you time that so well????

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Enchantress
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7 posted 2005-11-21 01:50 PM


Funny!  Much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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