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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2005-10-25 08:46 PM




It is not the inside
nor,   is it the out,
leaving a feeling felt
more of somewhere
in between
high and low
where the unbalanced   edges
struggle to seek foothold
secure enough
allowing weights to rest
   a little easier
so as not to   s l i p
from this side,     to that
but rather
to find a balance

         somewhere

in    the     middle.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-10-25 09:27 PM


at the risk of sounding flippant
sometimes, you've gotta fall really hard
on one side
and let the other side speak up for itself
knowing you know exactly what I mean

give'em HELLL this time, Donna, not a sweet smile

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2005-10-25 09:39 PM


I'm with Kacy, you go get em girlfriend.

BIG

m xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

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