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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-25 10:58 AM



Reveling in Your Attraction

He throws a word now and then
To rise me from the depths of low.
A wink or two in double take
Relaxing words in Knightly know.

Meetings in the walk of blue.
Those pathways lined with hopeful thought
That all can be despite the falls
The cherished good in wordlings caught.

The smiles that  lean against my lips
Result from meanings understood.
Retouched, my heart rejoices in
The "dear" of it, the thoughts of could.

Some day I'll visit all those thoughts
Attracted by the pure of them
Enticed to see the beauty of
And revel in the sounds of "M".


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2005-10-25 11:02 AM


May your thoughts become real
enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-10-25 12:26 PM


"The smiles that  lean against my lips
Result from meanings understood."


I love that.   

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-10-25 01:42 PM


Ah Maureen...it does feel good to be given some attention
even here in the pages blue.
Good to know you're smiling m'friend.
Hugs~Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

RMW
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4 posted 2005-10-26 11:42 AM


Nicely done, Maureen. Soft and touching. Bob
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-10-26 07:28 PM


Enjoyed...James
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