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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-25 08:09 AM



I imagined you
pressing your heart to mine
with just skin between us
and our day dreams

I imagined your hair
on my fingertips
as they weaved whispers
with a kiss now and then

as it fell over bare shoulders
and I imagined you
slow dancing your woman
with no hands

just the freefall love of you
becoming the rain
and watering my desert
with the soft storms of you

and now I real eyes you

__________

dark

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-10-25 08:19 AM


You manipulate words
so well...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-10-25 07:56 PM


DarkOne~
Oh my ... this took me on a beautiful word-trip~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-10-25 08:26 PM


perfection of word play babe.
good to see ya hon

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
4 posted 2005-10-25 08:29 PM


this is a nice write, full of emotion of what you feel, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

MGROVES
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california
5 posted 2005-10-31 06:01 AM


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-10-31 06:56 AM


I imagined you
pressing your heart to mine
with just skin between us
and our day dreams

I imagined your hair
on my fingertips
as they weaved whispers
with a kiss now and then

loved the above~~

M

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