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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-10-25 04:20 AM


Obligingly, the snow fell
outside the windows, gathered
in beds of purest
white, as you lay your
head on milky white
pillows. Tears of happiness,
lustrous in traced lines
on your dearest cheeked
faced, ran like streams
in sunlit meadows wondrous.
Bare the land, smothered
white as purest silk,
shimmering pellucid in pale
weak sun, shifting, drifting
as desert sands free
to hot searing winds.
Stemming the course of
your joyful tears, with
delicate kisses, enfolding you,
embosoming you, gathering you,
like tommorow is just
a far off dream.
Hot as the roaring
fire, our love carried,
swept along on chilled
brumal winds, sheets pale,
tangled in perfervid furrows,
as without, snow covers wrinkled
moors, boomed by ice winds.
Two people alive on
a crazy earth, locked together,
the world away, outside
our ardent embraced idyll.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-10-25 04:28 AM


PERFECTION! WOW!

Going to read again, slowly, to savor it it..mmmmm!
I am glowing....

~ARH

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2005-10-25 06:06 AM


Well thank you for that brilliant reply..it was something i wrote while listening to classical music..

Goldenrose.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-10-25 06:24 AM


John Barry.."Out Of Africa"? Just a lucky guess...LOL!

Love that new pho'o....you look great!

~ARh

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2005-10-25 06:38 AM


Well that was an acurate guess..well done..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-10-25 09:21 AM


I enjoyed the glow of your words and that of your new photo!

This poem is especially lovely and highly romantic!


Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2005-10-26 12:32 PM


Nice...a beautiful flow of words...James
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