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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It's always me, the wanting of, the bleeding inside for the impossible. I am a Country Song waiting for completion. I hear most of me on the radio driving to nowhere to meet no one, watching the leaves drop their color, feeling like those barren trees. I wake up to peace, darkness inviting now, spending my thoughts in seclusion, knowing no one would buy my song. I miss the me, I should be able to be. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
"I miss the me I should be." .......................... This is pretty good; there's more of a universal "I" about it that make's it exceptional. Again very good. John |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriend~ Holding you in thought~  'I am a Country Song waiting for completion' ... you will be sung~ Honest Injun ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I know exactly how you feel. I hear most of me on the radio driving to nowhere to meet no one, watching the leaves drop their color, feeling like those barren trees. ~ Expressed really well, Maureen. Thanks for sharing. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
nakedthoughts, I too understand, I often think with ever step forward, I should have taken two. I wonder if that mean's I'm in danger of being perpetualy dissastisfied. I'd buy it!:-) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I understand these thoughts well Maureen.. Well said Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I am a Country Song waiting for completion. I hear most of me on the radio" Loved those lines, Maureen. Hey, and, I don't believe "no one would buy" your song, for one minute! Just a matter of patience.....hugs, jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Glad you enjoyed my thoughts John. Marge ..oh someday maybe my song will be kept as something special. back Mike, always so nice to see and read you. Hope you are well, fellow Pennsylvanian. StevenS, I think with every forward step, I am knocked back two. I am afraid to go two steps at a time  ThanksNancyLee, Thanks for being here~~ M iliana, sometimes patience wears out~~...but I am in no hurry for now.Thanks Jo for the words. M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I would buy your song!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
wonderful piece Tom |
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