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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Nonsense where lines are rhymed in tune of hush and pansies are a gift of touch where bare is bid to grow again, and leaves are gilt in gold again perfect will come when perfect goes these times will stand in times of rose no one will know the theme of this but one will know in touch of kiss the sun is south no rainbows here in shadow’s keep where all is dear the key is in the house of cards knowing nothing is knowing hard perhaps its now the meter’s right but all I know? is holding tight. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, it's against the rules to post under Sunshine's name!!!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely colours through this one Karilea  m xx  ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your nonsense makes sense to me!  Loved it! Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie You knew I would love this...because it is so understood by this brain that sees things in this same way most of the time. And because it makes me smile!!!  |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sunshine, makes perfect sense to me. Loved it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Karilea... LOL@Deer's reply. Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your always an inspiration, and i thankyou for that My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are my sunshine.   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whooo hoooo, I tell you lady, you are one wise cookie, tried to highlight a line, paragraph, but each one was better then the other...thank you for this one, astounding write...spoke volumns! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I enjyed this, Sunshine. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are a clever one! The big question....timing. Obviously, no question on the rhyming. Love you, SIL..... ....jo |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Nonsense? Nonsense! You're something else! Hugs, Robert |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the key is in the house of cards knowing nothing is knowing hard You said a mouthful momma K! You know, I KNOW this one all to well. Hugs you. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your nonsense makes sense because it resulted in a smile! Patricia |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Your writings are always so amazing, K. I hope that I will someday reach your scale of talent! You're a inspiration to us all. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Karilea, This is quite a fun poem of puns! As always, good to read you! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'the key is in the house of cards knowing nothing is knowing hard' In the all of it ... I found this word-gem~ It likes me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
floating on cotton candi skiies above a tangerine colored river |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
smiling@posting under your name....this doesn't exactly fit your usual, but I love it...it fits me today |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
holding on tight.Somedays it's so hard to determine exactly what we need to hold on to. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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