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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-10-23 03:47 PM


I could melt in eyes
Touche on feelings
Of my heart
In magic that transports me

For you are magic and you twend and twist to establish

words motion emotion movement darkness light

In a swift

Evocation

Of giveness forgiveness desire


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-10-23 04:29 PM


Ok.

Consider me melt.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-10-23 04:58 PM


~ and the magic in your words, transports me!


Linda

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california
3 posted 2005-10-23 08:15 PM


your words can melt ones heart, soul

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-10-23 08:27 PM


Excellent Dave..this would melt any lady's heart.
Hugs~Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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