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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-23 01:07 PM



Join Me In Poetic Pie
~*Marge Tindal*~

A little slice of sweet rhyme
to whet the appetite of poets
Joining in friendship sublime
We’ll not see an end in sight
as long as the larder is full
Serving up Poetic Pie quilled
each one working their recipe
Individual perfections shared
presentation of poetic skills
Shake and bake the poetic pie
I'm hungry,now how about you?

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-23 01:10 PM


YUMMY!!  I would love a piece of that poetic pie Marge!
Beautiful words and presentation.
Hugs~Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2005-10-23 01:44 PM


a lovely arrangement in the name of poetry and friendship
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3 posted 2005-10-23 02:20 PM


a tasty breakfast treat! yippeeeee!
and I get to have more than one slice

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4 posted 2005-10-23 02:32 PM


I have few skills, but great appreciation.  You're creativity is boundless, Marge!

UMMMM
It’s sooooo good
I ate more than I should
Just view the size of this bite
You knew I had a big mouth, right?
I think Poetic Pie is best, you see
'Cause it's low in carbs and calories

Rae
      

[This message has been edited by Nan (10-24-2005 02:39 PM).]

sandgrain
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5 posted 2005-10-23 02:37 PM


Oops!  Now you believe I have no skills.  I Made that little response in an arc to resemble a bite, but when I put it here it's off center.  Next time I'll just stick to straight type.
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6 posted 2005-10-23 02:43 PM


You are so creative!   ....jo
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2005-10-23 02:44 PM


LOVE SHARING

Now Rae ... zipped you over to the Orthodontist for an 'overbite' correction~

UMMMM
It’s sooooo good
I ate more than I should
Just view the size of this bite
You knew I had a big mouth, right?
I think Poetic Pie is best, you see
'Cause it's low in carbs and calories



You quacked me up, lady~
(but ... the bill is in the mail)
*HUGLETS* ALL
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2005-10-23 04:46 PM


Oh, Marge, you're all heart.  My jaw sure does feel better...just how much?  I'll see when I get the bill.  Oh that's right, I have the Ray, you got the Bill.

Thanks, sweetie.

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9 posted 2005-10-23 04:54 PM


Marge, every poem of yours that I read is like having a slice of poetic pie! Pie

Yummy, yummy, in my tummy! Thanks! I needed that!

Yer sooo cute! ~ Just like your grandie girlies!

Loves 'n hugs,
EO

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10 posted 2005-10-23 10:26 PM


yep, yummy, thanks for the smile

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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11 posted 2005-10-23 11:42 PM


That was quite imaginative!  I love the experimentation with color and the ability to incorporate not only the form...but the subject matters so well!  Lovely write!  I'd like to take a bite!  {I know...it's corny...and it ryhmed...but...I try sooo hard...HaHa!}

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

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12 posted 2005-10-24 12:04 PM


Wonderful sharing taste sensation  , I would love a huge of that , but I think my muse is off on vacation

Hope

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13 posted 2005-10-24 08:15 AM


Dear Marge

Well, I wasn't hungry until I read your poem!  It is after 10pm here (Monday), so I best not raid the fridge!

You are clever with how you present your poetry!

Love Verbena xo


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14 posted 2005-10-24 09:52 AM


~smiling~...when reading you


M

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15 posted 2005-10-24 01:38 PM


The perfect pie.. all the sweetness without the calories!
Love the piece... of poem

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16 posted 2005-10-24 02:37 PM


Marge/sis....You are so good at presenting your lovely poetry....you make it delicious before the first bite.  I just ate a fresh apple of tree...may I share with you?  
Nan
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17 posted 2005-10-24 02:40 PM


Very cute, Marge... and I fixed Sandgrain's wedge of verse before I saw that you'd done it too...
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18 posted 2005-10-24 02:46 PM


I simply can NOT do that?

How did you get that perfectly square?



I did a triple acrostic once, that demanded this configuration, and it was hard enough to write, but when I couldn't get that bugger to space, I just...

sigh

My hat's off to you Marge.

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2005-10-25 10:04 AM



Thank you all
for *gifting*
S H A R I N G
P I E 'n' ALL


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Betty
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20 posted 2005-10-31 09:06 AM


I love this Marge
INclan
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21 posted 2005-10-31 03:32 PM


Marge,
You know I am in...
INclan

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22 posted 2005-10-31 03:52 PM


*chuckle*

I take it that means yer not gonna tell me, huh?

Man...now that means I'll have to ask a KID.

I hate when that happens.

Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2005-10-31 06:01 PM



THANKS TO ALL
K CHECK EMAIL
THAT'S IT KID

A HUGE HUGLET

~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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24 posted 2005-10-31 10:06 PM


Dear Marge:  Well, I just had a slive of raspberry pie, but I'd like a slice of yours too!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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