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MGROVES
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0 posted 2005-10-22 02:39 AM



my heart is still
filled with love and joy
for one certain man
who lived to destroy
forgiveness fills
my soul, my heart
my spirit soars
trying to keep love
and peace in every heart
all has changed
been rearanged
some are smart
some are deranged
i spent time
in silence
in my heart and soul
forgiveness and peace
not rock and roll
singing to the heavens
our creators word in heart
time to forgive
for world peace
love and joy
would never part

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

© Copyright 2005 marsha groves~adragonsdream~ - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2005-10-22 03:42 AM


Dear Marsha, thank you for this deeply touching and spiritual poem. There is such peace in being able to forgive.

You have expressed this truth beautifully ... your words are a treasure to be cherished. May your heart's motion involve many.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

ice
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2 posted 2005-10-22 09:31 AM


"singing to the heavens
our creators word in heart"

That's it, that is the key...to find the place in the heart, the bright place of beams, captured, and retained from Edens sun.


This poem has brought that light into my eyes, it has been dim for a while, a match struck, to relight my souls fire.

-----------ice
   ><>

Angelheart
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3 posted 2005-10-22 10:11 AM


this is very spiritual, to be able to forgive in ones eyes, very interesting to read, thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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4 posted 2005-10-22 10:39 AM


Forgiveness is a gift we give not only to others ~ but to ourself as well.

A lovely write from your loving heart. Thank you for spreading your Light into the world through these inspiring words.

Love & Light,
Linda

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5 posted 2005-10-22 01:00 PM


MarciaLove~

'all has changed
been rearanged'


... and with one forgiveness granted ...
all the world comes right once more~

*Huglets* to you sweets~
~*Marge*~


P.S.- can't get email through to you ... write me~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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JesusChristPose
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6 posted 2005-10-22 01:29 PM


Your faith shines through your words.
Enchantress
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7 posted 2005-10-22 01:33 PM


This is a wonderful testament of how we should be.
In order to heal we must first forgive.
heart hugs~Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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8 posted 2005-10-22 02:35 PM


forgiving someone who has trespassed your heart, body and soul, is powerful test of your strength and your soul's beauty

and you prevailed, Marsha

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9 posted 2005-10-22 02:51 PM


Not many can go into the silent space and come out with forgiveness.  Good write!
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10 posted 2005-10-22 08:32 PM


good read
xFromtheHeartx
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11 posted 2005-10-22 09:45 PM


very good write, thank you for sharring


MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-10-23 09:53 AM


i thank you all from my heart and soul. and if it wasnt for you all here. i dont think i would of ever gotten to forgiveness or even our creators word.  thanks

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2005-10-23 11:56 AM


Marcia~

Be-bumpa-do ...
cause I love you~

Got the email ... thankee lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

MGROVES
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14 posted 2005-10-23 02:53 PM


luv ya to lady, thanks

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Mistletoe Angel
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15 posted 2005-12-11 11:56 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Marsha, it is a most wonderful thing to be able to forgive, for in forgiving, we're able to heal and remedy some of the most blackest and thickest of scars and work to mediate some of the greatest toothaches of our times! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

MGROVES
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16 posted 2005-12-12 12:01 PM


thankyou so very much. i am truly greatful for your time

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan Caldwell
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17 posted 2005-12-12 08:29 AM


A very nicely written piece.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

MGROVES
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18 posted 2005-12-12 08:32 AM


thankyou

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2005-12-13 11:06 PM


Nice...James
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