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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2005-10-21 02:00 PM


IN THE SILENCE

In the silence

I imagine


In the space

between seconds


anticipating

knowing

sensing


awaitng your touch

happy that you are near


this moment

is all I need...

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-10-21 02:15 PM


This is absolutely beautiful...
I love those moments, just before a touch.
Hugs for a lovely keeper!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-10-21 02:23 PM


Oh, those electrifying moments of anticipation....

~ You captured them perfectly!

I do so enjoy your poetry! They stir my emotions.

Sending you a big, warm hug,
Linda

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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-10-21 03:11 PM


anticipation indeed!
love this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2005-10-22 01:14 PM


Thank you Enchantress,

May you have many, many moments like this.

SG

SimplyGold
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5 posted 2005-10-22 01:16 PM


EA,

Thank you for that lovely comment.

SG

SimplyGold
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6 posted 2005-10-22 01:18 PM


Nightshade,

Thank you for peeking in. I really appreciate your feedback and your observations.

SG

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