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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-21 07:37 AM


chain saws on toothpick handles
and the mary lamb wool less
since she met victoria

my eyes have thigh highs
with tennis shoe traction
climbing the window walls

down at the woolworths
that used to be dirt and trees
before the indians gave it up

for a hummer 2 and casino coins
and better schools in the alleys
where smackin' seems legal

if your jeans have green pockets
__________

dark

scribblenote: long handle chain saws used for trimming the palm trees...palm canyon store fronts with casual footed shoppers buying rodeo drive garments...and tradition being torn down as part of the new palm springs image...oh yeah and some high crime too behind the donut shops.

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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-10-21 07:50 AM


None of it seems to be home
anymore...
what history is left...
blows away into the foggy mornings...

sad smile, here...

good write, though.  But you always give
your best.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2005-10-21 08:02 AM


Interesting report ... when changes are not for the better!

Powerful write.

Love,
Margherita

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2005-10-21 12:18 PM


DS

Not the Palm Springs I remember, but I know that nothing stays the same.  I always enjoy your descriptions!  

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2005-10-23 12:15 PM


you can rise the dead, do you know that?
you stir me...........

MGROVES
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Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
5 posted 2005-10-23 10:07 AM


i believe you could make anything rise
missed ya

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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