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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-10-21 12:49 PM



Looking At Me


I like the way she looks at me
with her dark dreamy eyes.
For reasons important to her,
she likes me, only she knows why.
She fills my thoughts with melodies
making my heart want to laugh and sing.
If she wanted me as much as I wanted her,
I'd buy her a big diamond ring.


JamesLee
October20
2005

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-10-21 08:33 AM


Sounds like a ballad, very good!

Love,
Margherita

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