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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
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0 posted 2005-10-20 06:32 PM


I can see you,
Walking across the campus,
Smiling at the new chill in the air,
I can greet you
Beside you matching steps
And you laugh finding me there,
Thinking I’m witty
And somewhat charming,
And I try to let you know me
Without being too alarming,
I think you’re pretty
Inside, within your thoughts.



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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-10-20 07:06 PM


that is so pretty~~~

M

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2005-10-20 09:17 PM


very nice.
enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-10-21 12:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2005-10-25 12:42 PM


"I think you’re pretty
Inside, within your thoughts."

*sigh*

makes me melt.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2006-02-09 09:29 PM


My heart smiles with this one~

~ARh

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