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wordwizard
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0 posted 2005-10-20 05:15 PM


I think of a sweep
it thinks of flight
a sprinkle of star dust
as it swoops
unfaultering
casts its stick shadow
one scary rider
and dark clawed company
scavange the moon
then descend
to an emerald gem

I think of sweep
it thinks of landing
as it breaks
unwavering
to the light of squash faces
its passenger disembarks
feline fiend arcs furry back
to a monster chant
for a crowd of tricksters
needs to keep even tempo
on a night of candy pillage.





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DennisTheMenace
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1 posted 2005-10-20 06:37 PM


U got Wiz Oz on the brain, real witches are more like Glinda.  Although I do like the poem, and it approp with Holloween comin.
“Make me a potion, put it in my sack
Change her emotion and bring her back”

wordwizard
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2 posted 2005-10-20 07:56 PM


All I need now is to right write poems on
Glinda, well now as a tribute to the lady under the costume I think I might...but I like to write about all kinds of witches


ecrivan
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3 posted 2005-10-21 09:14 AM


I need to sweep this to the top


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-10-21 05:59 PM


Much enjoyed this....yes indeed!!!

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~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

wordwizard
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5 posted 2005-10-21 08:20 PM


They always write about the lady and ignore her vehicle so I decided to make a move and...


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