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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2005-10-20 01:01 PM


A Daily Occurrence

Confused
Pulled from my refugee

Blinding
Lost in the light of you

Shameless
When the thoughts arise

Lonely
When they are realized


© Copyright 2005 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
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1 posted 2005-10-20 01:22 PM


This is one awesome poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Suetang
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2 posted 2005-10-20 06:34 PM


I think it's amazing that so few words can say so much.  A great write, Thomas.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2005-10-20 07:42 PM


Nice write, but why lonely when they are realized? am I missin sumthin, Thomas?
Lots of possibile meanings in this...

Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 2005-10-20 07:44 PM


Wow, you made me smile and that is hard to do right now. Thank You for that and indeed a brilliant write, so few words, with so much to say!
Margherita
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5 posted 2005-10-21 09:47 AM


Yes, I think it happens just so!

Intense write, dear Thomas!

Love,
Margherita

Thomas119gold
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6 posted 2005-10-24 12:54 PM


Thank you all
the Maze to the heart has so many paths
so it is how you read it.

If it brings a smile then part of my job is done.
If it brings a question the other part is accomplished.

again thank you all.

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