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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-20 08:38 AM

Even a moment
that would bring us together
translates into "white noise" life for me.
Dismissing the worries and needed decisions
that an outsider can only imagine,
can speak the words "I understand"
when really, how can they.

Where there is peace, there are you-thoughts
to rock me into dream passages
where shadows no longer stalk,
and tears result from laughter
and the complexion of monotony
turns to tender touching thrills.

I question to get the answers,
the words my senses need to hear.
I am a challenge within a challenge
waiting to rise above it all.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-10-20 10:38 AM

MissWinterOfBliss~

'I am a challenge within a challenge
waiting to rise above it all.'

And I want to be here to read what wonderous ink your pen will find when you do~

Grandma called it 'porcelain complexion' ...~
You are a word-cameo of a poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2005-10-20 10:54 AM

M,
And as challenges go, you are a pleasant one. Guess I wouldn't claim to understand but I do claim to care.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-10-20 12:31 PM

"I question to get the answers,
the words my senses need to hear.
I am a challenge within a challenge
waiting to rise above it all."

And rise above it you will Maureen.
Sending heart hugs your way...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

4 posted 2005-10-20 07:35 PM

Beautifully written, and...

Where there is peace, there are you-thoughts
to rock me into dream passages
where shadows no longer stalk,
and tears result from laughter
and the complexion of monotony
turns to tender touching thrills.

... I remember that... couldn't of said it better.

"If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead."

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2005-10-20 07:42 PM

Good write, I needed to hear this today. Challenges anew. This poem was magnificent. Thank You for allowing me to see this today, a wonderful write indeed!

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2005-10-20 10:54 PM

once again you rise above the challenge
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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