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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-10-20 07:43 AM


Repost:


I hear the Music

Drums of profundity strike base
Upon my place in space
Touch simple subtle to my mind
Beneath the outer rind

Make dance the phantoms of my wile
In symbiotic style
And fire up desires frail
Stirring wind for my sail

Then the woodwinds in a surrey
Play lullaby’s flurry
Over the strings of violins
Tingling my very skin

And I am lost within a seem
With wayward Puck in dream
The moon is full the night is bright
And ecstasy is there in sight

My arms are wide unto desire
When conscious stirs and banks the fire


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Toerag
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1 posted 2005-10-20 07:50 AM


I hear music, voices, ringing and sorts of crap all the time?...Ya think it's a radio or something?....(Yea, I know, it's my mind...it's fried like an order of fries from McDonalds)....but I can still appreciate your words?.....nice write
"Sigh"...hope things are well with ya...shoot Bally a bird for me if ya see him any time soon.....

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-10-20 07:59 AM


And I am lost within a seem


my thoughts exactly~~
which seem is that...by the way?


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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-10-20 08:12 AM


Toerag
Good morning Toe, I'll do just that. LOL

Maureen,
Why it's the wile of a dream.

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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-10-20 10:05 AM


Then the woodwinds in a surrey
Play lullaby’s flurry
Over the strings of violins
Tingling my very skin

Oooh, I can actually feel these lines!
Lovely write this sunny fall Thursday.
Be well Seymour. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-10-20 10:24 AM


Chris,
Thank you sweety.

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6 posted 2005-10-20 11:39 AM


"Then the woodwinds in a surrey
Play lullaby’s flurry
Over the strings of violins
Tingling my very skin"


Wonderful wonderful morning read you gifted us with today dear Sy!

Have a great day!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-10-20 12:45 PM


Nancy,
I'll try to have a great day but I think the hurricane is comming.

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8 posted 2005-10-22 03:20 AM


hope your safe and well. i miss your smiles and joy and peace.  my visions they sooth
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-10-22 08:36 AM


MGROVES
Always my pleasure to see you here.

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