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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-10-19 10:20 PM



Stir Me Up


he has a way about him
and sings me to sleep
with his breath
where no grains fall
when side by side
a moment frozen
for all memories
no wind will be a storm
lightening just a candle
in the night
in my skies he flies
and I can carry him
where the only stirring
is my heart

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-10-19 10:25 PM


smiling atchoo...from the diary of your heart...

such contentment in the stirring too.

Drop me a line, or check IM please?

I've been lookin' for you, Mrs.

Sharksbean
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jax
2 posted 2005-10-19 10:26 PM


this is so beautiful thank you for sharing
iliana
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3 posted 2005-10-20 02:57 AM


You look beautiful like this!  
Dragon Mistress
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4 posted 2005-10-20 03:14 AM


Very nice, indeed!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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5 posted 2005-10-20 03:31 AM


<3 << that's a heart, in case you didn't know.
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6 posted 2005-10-20 08:06 AM


I love this, Helen...

I am waiting for that feeling to be mine...

M

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