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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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0 posted 2005-10-19 10:17 PM


Mumsy’s Autumn Day

She woke up in the morning
saw the sun was going to shine
donned her boots and orange goggles
“this autumn day is mine”

chop chop chop out came the hatchet
as she hacked at thick old stems
of moldy blue hydrangea
and she offered no amends

as she scalped off all the roses
from the bush, with some old saw
and yanked up all the daisies
with a stick that had a claw

oops, pressure washed the preacher
when he stopped by for a chat
she was so rattled when he left
she weed whacked Vern’s old cat

the neighbor thinks she’s charming
“that little lady’s sweet”
but she threw her trash bags in his truck
as he drove down the street

finally she surveyed her work
a wind blew from the east
and formed a cloud of dry leaves
from the neighbor’s dogwood tree

they clattered down the sidewalk
and danced madly in the grass
she stood there in the middle
waved her arms and laughed and laughed

the wind was warm and wild
and she curtsied to one knee
“thanks for the ovation,
mother nature, just for me”

© Copyright 2005 Kahlil - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2005-10-19 10:53 PM


Kahlil

I applaud you for such a wonderful write which brought a smile to my face.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2005-10-20 02:56 AM


Wonderful!  Much enjoyed.  Library clicked.   .....jo
Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
3 posted 2005-10-20 03:11 AM


Wonderful!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-10-20 05:05 AM


K ~ You just wrote yourself a winner! This was superb! Totally a joy to read and to savour!  

Sending you a BIG hug!

EA

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