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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-19 06:45 PM



Velveteen Sighs
~*Marge Tindal*~

Lay across me like the night
soft indigo velveteen

Drape me in clouded coverlet
pink silk chiffon cascading

Flash me prismatic nebula
emerald mesmerize my eyes

Remand me to custody of the stars
covering me in sprinkle of twinkles

Swirl the crescent phase of moon
around me as I sigh in swoon

Return me gently to the morn
with the greet of rays in soft adorn

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2005-10-19 07:09 PM



One need to know the word
tensile

for the deeper appreciation

Others
will enjoy the colorific noise
of this lovely, Marge...

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2 posted 2005-10-19 08:01 PM


*sigh*
Betty
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3 posted 2005-10-19 08:23 PM


Beautiful
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4 posted 2005-10-19 10:15 PM


Oh so lovely Marge.
Hugs, Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2005-10-19 11:24 PM


Outstanding Marge! Thanks for the link to Open!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2005-10-19 11:53 PM


Beautiful poem Madame...as always I am in awe of how sincere and sweet your poetry always is!  Lovely write!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

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7 posted 2005-10-20 02:53 AM


Very much enjoyed this!   ....jo
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8 posted 2005-10-20 03:15 AM


One word.. beautiful!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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9 posted 2005-10-20 03:31 AM


beautiful, indeed...
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10 posted 2005-10-20 08:23 AM


a pleasant colorful fall morning read...


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11 posted 2005-10-20 09:10 AM


very nice
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12 posted 2005-10-22 03:16 AM


always a pleasure, missed your beauty

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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13 posted 2005-10-22 08:57 PM


Sounds like one of my dreams...Sighhhhh.
Lovely.

Angelheart
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14 posted 2005-10-22 09:05 PM


this is very good, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Marge Tindal
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Thanking each of you for the the appreciation you pay me for sharing~
I am *word-enriched* by knowing each of you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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