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Incandescent Love (Sonnet)
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Incandescent Love (Sonnet) |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
The World — but grey and flat-dimensioned space Of "oneself"s and "I"s trudging foreign streets; So crowded, so alone in self-embrace — Until Love’s power hidden fears defeats. Till its refulgent glow dispels the dark As it warms, comforts; banishes the tears Of loneliness and strife; it spells its mark Upon a soul, the pining heart it sears. What pain to pay in overdue return For the comfort of Love’s radiant light; But the pain so dims in the twilight burn Eons hence in acceptance of the plight: In ecstasy to grasp Love’s edge of knife, This searing, fragile filament of Life. CG [This message has been edited by CastleGuard (10-19-2005 03:22 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CastleGuard~ This is just so lovely ....~ I LOVE the word 'refulgent' !!!! It is so nice to read you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice work CG, you did well. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Marge - thank you, and I, too, now love the word "refulgent"... Magnus - thank you, your words of praise are much appreciated. CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loved the title, it was a perfect word choice, I love that word."Incandescent" Loved the poem~ ARh  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-16-2005 06:20 AM).] |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, ARH. The energy between two living 'posts'...all that's needed is the 'current'.  CG |
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