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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-18 07:32 AM


they were 7/11 day dreams
bought like the gangee's brass
just before 2 am
next door to the yap dancer's
topless bar and sundown lawn

and we hated the 57 chevy sound
when the blind woman would read
cap mark divots in the chrome
and foretell that our future was grim
even for a mother behind the scenes

but you brought us courage then
in your bosom of forgetfulness
with that place for big hands
to play in it don't matter
if hungover til tomorrow's howl

you were the chair, rocking electric
with strap downs for our wrists
and your little whip at the end
just to make sure it hurt all the way
not just on the edges like soda

hell bless you now,  betty bull moon


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dark

scribnote: "betty bull moon" is a cafe glass full of 'shine with a bit of red bull for color and tart..ol' blackie drove a 57 with a 50 gallon tank under the back seat outside of flatriver mo..carried the goods for the locals..yap dancer is a satire on the island's female dress code and the rest of it is what you see when you close your eyes..arrigoto


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1 posted 2005-10-23 10:44 PM


i love it when i learn something new from you. your a pleasure

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2005-10-23 10:50 PM


Those must have been some pretty interesting days 'cause this is some pretty interesting writing!
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