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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-10-18 07:18 AM



And so
Though slowly
The night air calm
Cool and still
A spider
Climbs its fragile thread
Across the face
Of an autumn moon



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1 posted 2005-10-18 09:23 AM


Exquisite! Keepin' this. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-10-18 11:46 AM


John~
I could 'see' this -

'A spider
Climbs its fragile thread
Across the face
Of an autumn moon'


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-23 01:04 AM


window obviously needs cleaning or wait for a even better poem.

enjoyed
beautiful.

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