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Open Poetry #36

This Took Minutes To Write

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-10-18 05:08 AM

This Took Minutes To Write

He's too busy for me now
The one I once knew
Where is the caring guy
Charming someone new

Appears I was that friend
The one that he forgot
He saves no time for me
While his phone runs hot

No longer keeps in touch
It was an obvious sign
Same excuse was used
Says he has had no time

Thought he was my friend
Had I made a mistake
I was just an email away
How long would that take

Having put time to the test
To share some insight
I was able to find the time
This took minutes to write

Hope©2005
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-10-18 08:37 AM

It's curious how women can always find the time ~ but men can't! lol

Well, I see you used your time wisely with this write!

May you receive as good as you give in life! ~ and that, Dear Hope, is a great deal!

Linda

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-10-18 09:17 AM

Consider yourself, the one that got away...and for good cause....hugs lady...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-10-18 05:44 PM

Nice...why waste time on a man thats unavailable...James

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2005-10-18 06:20 PM

Hope

Your words speak volumes and I think he has missed out, big time. I wish for you much love and happiness.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2005-10-18 08:42 PM

Hope,
A very succinct point indeed. Friends, they aren't always what we think they are. Here's to better times. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-10-23 10:58 PM

yea, men never seem to have the time for ones they should. but have plenty of time for ones they shouldnt

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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