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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2005-10-18 02:10 AM



I'm tattered
Torn, broken, lying on the floor
I don't have the love to give
I'm lost,
So fragile
I don’t want to hurt anymore
Yet, I continue on the path
That led me here to this place
Aching, longing, yearning for release
From the darkness in which I dwell
Never to see the light
Of happiness
Again


This is respectfully dedicated to a friend that I was talking to online this morning... I hope she stops in and sees it.

When all is said
All is done
Still I live
And carry on-
Quiet Riot

© Copyright 2005 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
Kellie_Cantrell
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1 posted 2005-10-18 02:14 AM


It seems so much less dark and dreary when its coming for you. It's cheered me up too! Now... its my turn to thank you... for pushing me and getting me to write, because its been awhile and I didn't I guess I just needed a little shove...

The poem is very good, and I think I know how it feels... lol and it feels a little bit less incomplete.

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2 posted 2005-10-18 02:35 PM


c'mere Lazarus, give us a hug

and forgive me

I'm a bit stressed out these days


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3 posted 2005-10-18 03:39 PM


Kellie- Thanks for reading... It is much appreciated.

Karen- Always too kind with your encouragement. Only one question... forgive you for what??

When all is said
All is done
Still I live
And carry on-
Quiet Riot

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-10-18 05:13 PM


An empathic, compassionate write.

And I send a loving, healing hug for whom it was written.

Love & Light,
Linda

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