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My Tale of Prime
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My Tale of Prime |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Tale of Prime I’ve sailed my ship of primal prime That raging roar of primal time And ask forgiveness of your heart The circumvent and time apart For now I suffer its dismay The loss of time along the way The closeness that I could have had That stays within my heart so sad I’ve found true treasure lies within My wife, my children, not the din And now reach out to touch once more The soul of those that stay my core I cannot hold or kiss enough To make up time my blind mans bluff To make them understand lost need The treasure of God given seed Each kiss and touch keeps me alive The loss of which I’d not survive |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, Seymour. Time waits for no man as they say. Nor woman. All we can do is love more for time lost. Excellent write. Sunny Monday Hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sad write and understood enough said hugs to you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thanks for the read and lovely reply. inkedgoddess Hugs back and thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Each kiss and touch keeps me alive The loss of which I’d not survive"  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., you are a blessed poet ~ and man.   EA P.S. And yours is a prime tale to be sure! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-17-2005 03:11 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There are times when our clocks seem to move too swiftly...I know...and I do understand, more than you might know...Rest well knowing that you have done well... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "I’ve found true treasure lies within My wife, my children, not the din And now reach out to touch once more The soul of those that stay my core I cannot hold or kiss enough To make up time my blind mans bluff To make them understand lost need The treasure of God given seed" Such pondering makes me ponder also...thank you for that!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’ve found true treasure lies within My wife, my children, not the din And now reach out to touch once more The soul of those that stay my core I cannot hold or kiss enough To make up time my blind mans bluff To make them understand lost need The treasure of God given seed Each kiss and touch keeps me alive The loss of which I’d not survive ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ How bout winkies? will winkies work? For you, I'll make extra *L*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM Thank you for taking the time to reach back. You get an exta smooch from Randy for that. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your too cool, sir  My spirit will rise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And now reach out to touch once more The soul of those that stay my core ~*~ You know, Sy... this brings back a winsome thought, of my beloved grandmother, who never rocked herself in a rocking chair but just rocked herself until she could not any longer... Oh, you would have enjoyed her chutzpah... but she always did say... quote: I always knew what she meant. So do you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Yes I know what she meant. Thank you love. |
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