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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-10-17 01:34 AM



Sorry for the way I felt
Sorry for the hand that
I once held

Sorry for the tears I
brought, Sorry for all
those things that I
thought

Seeing you once again
and hoping I could only
be just your friend

Your once gray eyes turn
blue just a glimpse Ive thought
there would be a future me and you

Now the time has come and I have
found my life a new

The talk we had was tough on me
but it something I had to do.

now I can finally get over you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Dragon Mistress
Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2005-10-17 05:37 AM


Wow this hit home...

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2005-10-18 03:49 PM


some do not realize how tough it is to love.....if only it were easier...but if I was, there would be no beautiful expressions of emotion in poems like this one...........
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-10-18 04:43 PM


"The talk we had was tough on me
but it something I had to do.

now I can finally get over you"

~ Let the healing begin!


EA

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2005-10-19 12:14 PM


thanks guys


story is

a great guy found me and that is the one i want to be with he cherishes and cares about me alot

vs the dipwad i could not get out of my mind.

the talk was hard but was essential

losing a friend in all of it sucks but my happiness is worth it

i got to be happy and i can't be with the other guy in my life

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