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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The crisp thoughts of autumn do linger In the full bathing light on the land Undisturbed in the daze floating outward Remedy laying light in my hand Not a breeze might the rumple of quiet Up above sparks of solar affairs The description that floods unassuming But a snapshot of tangible cares A delight settles down for the moment Always welcome the lift left behind Such an innocent spectrum alluring In the intimate thoughts that I find By the way may conclude in the darkness But the richness of thinking commits While a sadness of passing seems sown in Every piece finds the place it befits As I would not change time for a season Nor give up a season for time As each in it’s own step commences Without seeking permission to rhyme Copyright Kkh 10/16/05 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Remedy laying light in my hand" a transitive verb, too.  lay, that is.  But seriously, lady, you captured the sparkles of spots in the sky with this'n. 'twas lovely... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"As I would not change time for a season Nor give up a season for time As each in it’s own step commences Without seeking permission to rhyme"  Loved it, Kathleen! You're such a clever writer.....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
As I would not change time for a season Nor give up a season for time As each in it’s own step commences Without seeking permission to rhyme Isn't this the eloquent truth! Beautiful flow, TD! miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Without seeking permission to rhyme", you went ahead and did it anyway! ~ and with brilliance! A wonderful write!!!  EA |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Amazing once again.....such rich and crafty words you spin, when you weave your poems.....a pleasure to read a poem, that can actually be felt as if it is alive...... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Am I just "reading in," or is this poem terribly complex? I'll vote for the latter....and then go do something simple...work.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Complex? I certainly would think so if I were a betting man...This lady writes in a way that most of us only can touch ever so lightly... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Each step in reading this took me further into the beauty of your words...no missteps at all...just wonderful poetry! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As always, a beautiful poem, by a wonderful poet. |
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