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Open Poetry #36

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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2005-10-16 11:05 PM

the venture of the aries,
given bounty from the ram
insurmountable greed
a dire quest for humility

The begining rare,
for what moments lasts a lifetime.
Letting go of fear and shame,
raped of love.

locked in captivity,
keyed into a realm of silence
shadows marked with prosperity,
blanketed expressions halted.

Left only now in shadows of fear,
depressed,cold and lying on the ground.
Broken in fear lost faith.
No hope, Vintage futures.

( I wrote this right before dueting with Ringo and I used some of these ideas with that poem. Just letting you know!)

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2005-10-16 11:17 PM

I am really glad to see you back and better than ever.
This is a great piece of work.

When all is said
All is done
Still I live
And carry on-
Quiet Riot

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2005-10-16 11:45 PM

Ringo- Its nice to be back, and thank you!

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