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Open Poetry #36

The Birds (A Tanka)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-10-16 09:08 PM

The Birds

I sat there watching
As the birds all took their bath
In a small puddle
Splishing and splashing around
As they cleaned themselves well

10-16-05

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-10-16 09:29 PM

Excellent Tanka Sue..
Good visuals ..and it is such fun to watch the little birds having their bath.
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-10-16 09:35 PM

Very sweet Sue. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-10-16 09:42 PM

SweetSuzieQ~
It is relaxing to take the time to see the little things that matter~

Love this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-10-16 10:15 PM

Sue, tanka for this tweet birdy tanka!

Linda

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-10-16 11:03 PM

I always enjoy poems about nature. Sue, good job!

......jo

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