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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-16 03:59 PM



Release Me To The Wind

~*Marge Tindal*~ as ~SkyeLara~

When I am but stardust once more,
my Spirit free for the all of time
release me to the wind, my friend
knowing I will word-return
for the good of all mankind~

When an unexpected breeze catches you
mid-sentence in a thought of rhyme,
let me word-race through your mind
with inked inspire of my sending~

Bending the lush rush grasses
in the swirling ink-of-think
just as I promised I would
When I word-come again
resting upon the page
blue … oh, so blue
with gifting words
that you know
I promised
to you~

Never more free in Spirit am I
than the next gentle breeze
that catches you word-cavorting barefooted
leaving you breathless
in the drink of ink~


~Because ~SkyeLara~ breathes through me ...
gifting me with word-promises of more to come~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2005-10-16 04:42 PM


Our greatest gift are the thoughts we write
that touch and inspire...

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2 posted 2005-10-16 05:19 PM


Madame Marge as Lady Lara...this was a powerful piece!  The language was captivating and the images were vivid!  I loved this piece!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

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3 posted 2005-10-16 05:25 PM



Marge, may you continue to be at one with the wind while breathing in the gift of SkyeLara's words.

Love & Spirit Light,
EO

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4 posted 2005-10-16 08:19 PM


And what a gift to be able to breathe through SkyeLara.
Beautiful Marge.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-10-16 08:22 PM


Nice...James
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6 posted 2005-10-16 08:39 PM


a rare, beauty you are, marge,m'friend

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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7 posted 2005-10-16 08:46 PM


Very pretty, Marge!
Betty
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8 posted 2005-10-16 10:53 PM


Beautiful Marge!
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9 posted 2005-10-16 10:57 PM


I know your words will last eternal, Marge!  I loved the way you shaped part of this poem into an arrowhead.   ..........jo
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10 posted 2005-10-17 10:07 AM




I soooo enjoy being with SkyeLara ... she brings the wisdome of words for sharing~

JO !!!
How perceptive of you to have noticed and mention the arrowhead ... funny thing ... it just fell to the page that way .... must have been the intend of SkyeLara for it to happen that way~

You friends are all so wonderful to allow me to share~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge/SkyeLara*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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11 posted 2005-10-19 06:02 AM


Dear Marge

This is wonderful!

Thank you for sharing SkyeLara with us all here in PiP!

Love Isobel xo


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12 posted 2005-10-19 06:08 AM


Dear Marge

This is wonderful!  Thank you for sharing SkyeLara with us all here in PiP!

Love Isobel xo


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13 posted 2005-10-19 07:24 AM


Marge, I find it very comforting to think there are sweet spirits like yours blowin on the wind, to help us along lifes pathway.
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14 posted 2005-10-19 11:00 AM


enjoying your word-i-ness


M

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Thanking both Steven and MzWynter ...
I have no alternative ... SkyeLara speaks ... I have only to listen and to share~

*Huglets*
~*Marge/SkyeLara*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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16 posted 2005-10-19 11:28 PM


Dear Marge:

Your Skyelara poetry is always haunting and beautiful!

Love
Betty Lou

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17 posted 2005-12-07 08:19 PM


BettyLou~
I am tardy in my thankee ... but it's sincerely meant~

Wishing you the best of the upcoming Christmas holiday~

Hoping my Ronnie is doing all better~
I sure love that fella~

  Hi Ronnie~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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18 posted 2005-12-09 10:44 PM


Loving the release of these words!  Yes, your words remain!  Very, very much enjoyed, Marge.

miscellanea

    

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19 posted 2005-12-09 11:39 PM


Thank you Marge, for this exquisite poem and line of thought.  I am going to read this over and over . . . and over.  

I don't understand about Skyelara.  At first I thought that she was another identity of you (perhaps your nom de plume in another poetry forum, or here, previously).  Then I thought that perhaps she is somebody who has passed on and was close to you.  Then I thought that perhaps I am wrong about that.  Perhaps I am out of line asking, but if am not, please tell me.  Whoever she is, she seems a wonderful person/spirit/identity and very inspirational.

- Owl

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20 posted 2005-12-09 11:54 PM


Oh Marge, this is so beautiful. We are glad to have you share with us.
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21 posted 2005-12-10 05:13 AM


Beautiful and inspiring Marge, hope you're well, it sounds as if you are.

Making me think this morning...


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22 posted 2005-12-10 07:37 AM


Marge, your poetry always touches my heart, no matter what the subject, and today this is especially true...'S'
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23 posted 2005-12-10 07:41 AM


Very insightful...we are all stardust.
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24 posted 2005-12-10 08:56 AM


Never stop word weaving for us the vision that are gifted to you for they word breath life into our souls....A stunning write that I was drawn into as you let me word share your inner heart....I love it and the feel of it in my soul....***big hugs***
Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2005-12-10 09:28 AM


Friends~
What a lovely surprise to see SkyeLara and the kind comments from you all~

Thank you, Miscellanea, for the back page read~

And Diana/OwlSA ... SkyeLara is the Spirited muse of my Native American Indian poetry who gifts me with the words to share~

I SO appreciate each of you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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