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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-10-16 07:49 AM


Lost in Time

My hands have lost their stuff of will
My muscles gone their tough and skill
My mind has laid me down at best
Upon a glade of green to rest

The vision that I see is taint
The hues aglow are misty faint
The sky and clouds are fused in hews
Within a multi shroud of blues

My hearings culled my sight is dulled
And callus has my touch annulled
With powers of decision gone
I rest the green a garment worn

And yet I wonder at the tame
The sharp of me that’s gone to lame
Sitting in the grass in rest
With lowered head to times conquest

There is to me one thing torch clear
This scorch of time burns out I fear


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-10-16 08:34 AM


I rest the green a garment worn

~*~

Seasonal transition
at its brightest, our Sy...

sending warm hugs...




scorpio
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right...there
2 posted 2005-10-16 09:02 AM


May the torch burn on Sy.  I enjoy the enlightment.

believe in what your heart feels...

MGROVES
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3 posted 2005-10-16 08:47 PM


trying to catch up again. missed the smiles take care sir

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Denise
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4 posted 2005-10-16 08:53 PM


Well done, Sy!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-10-16 09:28 PM


Sunshine
Thank you love.

scorpio
Thank you for the read and reply.

MGROVES
Always enjoy your comments

Denise
Thank you sweety.

marcel
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6 posted 2005-10-18 03:33 PM


loved the flow and beauty of this piece...nicely done.
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