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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-15 01:13 PM



Jezebel Dawn

~*Marge Tindal*~

What Jezebel Dawn dares romp the lawn
with gathered favors of the night?
Passionate morn prances in play
upon the rising of this day~

Oh, you imp of morning come
laden favors gathered on yester-night
Spread your legs of raying light
climaxing a morn of sheer delight~

Jezebel Dawn, I know you well
lens-captured beauty in raptured swell
What charge you for pleasures these?
Splay of copper-toned tricks up your sleeves~

Stripping bluesy chiffon from ebon sky
draping us in slip of morning sigh
Come once more, you Jezebel Dawn
spread your favors ‘cross the lawn~



~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-10-15 01:20 PM


Marge/sis....Oh, I love the sensual sky feeling of this.  
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2 posted 2005-10-15 01:42 PM


Image portrayed with wonderful sensual passion

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3 posted 2005-10-15 01:49 PM


Oooh Marge....softly sensual...love this!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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4 posted 2005-10-15 05:35 PM


Wow...that was amazingly erotic...yet was completely innocent!  I loved the imagery...it was beautiful!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

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5 posted 2005-10-15 09:24 PM


OOhhhh I love this
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6 posted 2005-10-16 02:20 AM


beautifully passionate and silently erotic...........
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7 posted 2005-10-16 04:07 AM


..layers of delight..a pleasure to read..


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8 posted 2005-10-16 10:59 AM



Thank you all for your replies to this little piece~
Sometimes we just don't know what's coming our way, now do we ?

Sitting outside ... the thought of Jezebel Dawn took wing ... it flew to the page in an instant ... then I had to wait for the next day sunrise ... to capture the gown of her~

Believe me, I am more than pleased to see that you found her sensually glorious too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2005-10-17 01:02 AM


Absolutely gorgeous!  Marge, this is such a beautiful photo, too.   ....jo
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10 posted 2005-10-23 10:50 PM


georgous. as your heart and soul

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2005-10-24 09:59 AM



Thanks everso much for liking this one~
For some reason it seems to wrap around me~

Wishing this day was rising just like this ... but, alas, the Wilma rains and winds are besiegeing us~
Hoping for clearing skies REAL SOON !
The temps have dropped and hey ... I've actually got a light jacket on !
Oh ... that's right ... it's nearing the end of October now isn't it ?

We Floridians are soooooo spoiled !

Keeping those friends and family in south Florida in prayerful vigil~

*Huglets*
~*Marge of the dreary morn*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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