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Whisper Her Just One
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Whisper Her Just One |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Whisper Her Just One The sound of air on the roof crosses six panes of glass into moan and stirs the leaf whispering secrets across the patio They think I can't say the satin underneath the gay in the place that was summer changes spent true but sent twirling too across the autumn grass I hear them giggle my expense in only breathing words to the passing shadow what does she know they say of flying or the taste of a tree We dance not for her poetry or the cave she has built for love we are the bite that blinks her view and opens up the keen unseen See how she turns her eyes sideways to cut the glare of our dare we all danced and ribald with frantic air she is dense with thought and too soft Let us fun this sun in her doorway until she dazzles the page with her loose muse and makes a leaf treasure on the page of time whisper her just one sound divine ---- 1-23-02 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MsMartieSis~ 'Let us fun this sun in her doorway until she dazzles the page with her loose muse and makes a leaf treasure on the page of time whisper her just one sound divine' Uh huh ... I've seen the beauty of this poetic girl ... she sets the pages blue awhirl~ One more Martiesque Moment~ Love you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Its lunchtime, and nothing makes me happier then to see you posted a new poem.... There are many here who this poem emulates, although, in your mind, perhaps your thinking of just one....whomever she is, she couldn't receive a nicer gift. Your a treasure Martie, truly. thank you for the lovely masterful read. Enjoyed! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ahhh, LeeJ....I am only speaking of myself and my reluctant muse...who is looking out the door at the vibrant day. Marge/sis...thanks for you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely this, Martie... lovely you. Heart hugs. ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You have an exquisite way of say.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Like Sy, I would agree you can sure sway a day  beautiful as usual Martie. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, Martie, my muse and I have been lingering in the sunlit doorway quite often recently. Love this. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well, in my humble opinion, your muse treats you nicely. What a delightful write you have penned. Lots of images for the imagination. I liked it. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A wonderful poem, Martie. Talent once there is always there but the trouble is that it operates best in silent moments and what a noisy world we live in. Beautiful write, Martie. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
satin |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Beautiful Martie, you own the words. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie, this IS a leaf treasure and a sound divine! ....jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
We've been blessed once again Oh Honeysuckle, you make me sigh. Always beautiful you. m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Martie, You are such a master of perception, image, thoughts, sounds, words... I feel so fortunate to be able to read the work of such wonderful poets and poetessess! Way to go! miscellanea |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you are the greatest Martie - wonderful poetry here!!! Paul |
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