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jellybeans
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0 posted 2005-10-14 10:05 AM


what child is this
whose faith lives
even so
and is
certainly counted towards
goodness when trustworthy guidance
prevails

what child is this whose
innocence of heart grants
a world of madness and pain
unjustified multiplicity;
whose ire will not cover
even one inequity

what child is this whose questions
receive no answers;
whose heartbeat records a loss
of a measure that cannot be considered
even close to plausible

and what child is this that is no more-
my love my life my blood
no longer can we touch
for where you are and where I am
are not the same

what child is this whose birthday’s
are ashen remains?


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-10-14 10:17 AM


  you tight
and holding your hand silently....

hugs sweetie, many many hugs....

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-10-14 10:24 AM


SweetJellyOne~
The pain too real ... the tears still fall~
Faith is the buoy to which one must cling~
Sending *HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2005-10-14 12:06 PM


JB,

with hand extended, powerful writing.

SG

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-10-14 12:22 PM





Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-10-14 12:22 PM


Hugging you tight JB...

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

jellybeans
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6 posted 2005-10-14 02:10 PM


I just want to thank you all intensly, for if not for you, I would lie about the hurt and say that these were just words, but your perception makes me see that I am only pretending to be strong
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-10-16 09:16 AM


Never lie...
speak the hollow truths...
and know that it will
always be the right of yours
to remember love.


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8 posted 2005-10-17 05:02 PM


If hearts could reach across the miles
I'd share your tears, then pray that smiles
Be your companion - for it's his due
To be remembered so by you.
If I could comfort, ease the pain,
Spare you from grief's sad refrain,
Carry your sorrow as my own,
I would gladly be knocked prone
To bring back your happiness
And save you from all distress.
I can't force life to be fair -
But I can sure wish I was there.

HUGS to you, sweet lady... and so much love.

jellybeans
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9 posted 2005-10-21 02:52 PM


know that I read your love and that it helps
love you
I am more because of you

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