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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-13 10:28 AM


you keep me at such a distance

but my mind has longer arms

and hands with fingers

that would know the depths of you

even beyond those places

you have touched before
I look at your eyes often

and wonder of your mouth

when it says please

and when you bite your lip

and say yes like that
and I wonder how you look

when you are at the window

waiting for the ocean

to touch the glass

with a whisper


so you can write love words

in the memory of a vapor


__________
Dark


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-10-13 10:53 AM


Dark~

Morning *sighs*
of realize
that you are
word-near ... though vapor-far~

Your words breathe beauteous thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-10-13 11:21 AM


she answers:

memory of vapor
in the heart of perceptible ripples
monotonous sweeps of horizons depth
gently half-submerged
on a hill to hill threshold
long passages &
perfect solitude simmering wickedness
that intimate kind…which
widens ships anchored into
ministering spirits
in the stranger of eagerness
looking surprised
earnest consideration
brings contentment to mind
i am that mysterious shade in your nights
passing you a rope ladder of mystery
half crazed with your eyes…
like summer lightening across the sky
lean over the rail, quietly remark
smother my witchcraft
possessed in a tropical sea
fetching us some reflection of depth
somber…immense, soothing undertones
stepping right inside…
you bloodthirsty ruffian
you’ve had the prize….
the last spell of ocean’s porthole
whispers in your ear, with a quiet smile
make me hold on a little while longer~
take off my frigid dignity…
play for me, music of the night...
beyond those places in my eyes...

now see what you've inspired


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2005-10-13 11:23 AM


ms marge, thanks little lady..

________

ms leej
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm dayyyyymmmmmmmm I likes it
you are a lovely river

thanks

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-10-13 11:56 AM


thus dubbed my new favorite from you D...

made me smile ya did.  

LOVED this'n hon.  

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
5 posted 2005-10-13 01:47 PM


this is very nice, thanks fofr sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-10-14 06:15 PM


Most definitely one of my favourites by you Mr D...

you write beautiful.

Thanks for sharing.

m xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

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