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Dragon Mistress
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0 posted 2005-10-12 03:35 AM


I close my eyes
And I see you
Forever memorable
I smell you
As I sleep
I hear you
Forever lingering
I feel you

I know its naught
But a haunt
Tricks on my heart
By a tortured soul

My heart stays
Beating in your pocket
Forever
Beating in your pocket
Wasting away

You don't love me...

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

© Copyright 2005 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-10-12 12:05 PM


Tanya~
Such a sad little piece with much beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-10-12 01:49 PM


Snatch your heart right back out of that pocket! You are a pretty young lady and are talented as well. You should never be sad.
Great write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-10-12 02:57 PM


your heart is as beautiful as that lovely smile of yours...don't stay down long, you've got way to much to share.
Martie
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4 posted 2005-10-12 03:54 PM


DM

I agree with my friends above!  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-10-14 06:50 PM


Nice writing...James
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6 posted 2005-10-14 07:05 PM


Oh, my.  I feel the hurt in your poem.  Miss Dragon Mistress, you convey emotion well.  When I presume a poem is from someone's personal experience, I often find I'm mistaken.  If this is from your own experience, I hope things brighten.
          miscellanea

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